First Idea Pitch

To show off the concept of my opening, I used my original drawings from the channel idents, and put them all in one composition, whilst masking out the backgrounds of each of the drawings.

For my feedback, I was suggested to make the idents longer, to the length of an actual TV show opening (15+ seconds). Although the brief says they wanted short openings, I could make a set of both, ona having the picture drawn in, and one that's shorter without it. I was also told that the picture should start from the background, and then have the pieces of he city come in rather than the sky coming in last. The skyscrapers in the back do not fit in either, and I was suggested to scrap them in favour of having the South Downs in the background instead.