Crit

I think that my crit this time could have gone a bit better. I did like the design of my website or the quality of the video that much, and I got a lot of points that I could improve on.
The website was said to be a good attempt at redesigning a cluttered site, but still had too much going on. To address this, I am thinking about making the icon bar optional and will be hidden away by default. I should also make the content boxes less text heavy.
The video needs some more work done to it, such as having short animations to know what you are clicking on, and just better examples of customisation. I will change this by animating more parts, such as the size and position of widgets.
My PDF design wasn't criticised too much either, mainly just the amount of text on each page. I shall make the text bigger and cut it down so the pages look better.