Yesterday was crit, and I got a lot of feedback that will help me improve my ebook. I got good comments about the comic book art style I chose for my book, and the animations were good, but could use some improvement. The main bombing animations could use a few more details to maintain the quality of animation from beginning to end, which I agree with since the end of it did get rushed.
As I had issues with linking my ebook today, obviously this was brought up in crit. I was having problems with iBooks author, as the links worked there but not on the iPad. Either I will have to redo my navigation, or try and find a fix for this, especially on the contents page where none of the links work and that is the most important links page.
One of my tutors also said I should change the font on my comic book title pages to an actual font, so it fits in with the rest of the typed fonts.
Over the next week I plan to improve my animations, make slight changes to the visual style of my ebook and most importantly, fix the navigation links on my ebook. I may also make slight changes to my animations, to make piece look better overall.
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