The feedback I got from my pitch was positive overall. I got good feedback for the story, and the art style I was aiming for on my story. However, I have a few things to think about after getting some comments about where to go after this.
The first thing I have to think about is the navigation. I haven't really done too much about it, and I need to think about this a bit more. I got suggested a timeline of events idea, where you can scroll through what happened during the day.
After my map intro video, I was thinking about making the map interactive. Because I have the information about where the bomb hit on the day, I could make small info boxes about the other bomb hits, without it taking focus away from the main story. As there is no autoplay on iBooks Author, I could make it so clicking on the Newick part of the map could make the story part start playing,
Other than that, I haven't really thought much else about how to make it more interactive... I'll do some sketches and see where I can go from there.
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