The feedback given on all of my posters was positive. It was said that the silhouette idea was very bold and strong, and although the second poster was different, the idea worked very well with the rest of my posters. The art for these was strong, and it did not need changing. The main rooms for improvement on my posters were to change the background font colours on some of the posters, such as the red on the hotel poster and the green on the bar poster.
My leaflet however, was still in development stages and got a lot more criticism.
The main criticism for my leaflet was that it looked so different from my posters, even though i kept the "Brighton" logo theme. The arrow theme did not go over that well, and it was said that it looks more like a leaflet for industrial growth, rather than urban regeneration and that the buildings look like a bar chart. The lack of white on the Brighton text was also a complain. In response to this feedback, I am going to completely scrap this idea, and make it more fitting for my actual theme. I will change the image completely, probably to another silhouette design. The colours will also be changed to look like my posters as well. I will completely scrap my current logo and make the "Brighton" text my new logo.
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